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Haiku (and haikai)

Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2015 6:05 pm
by Nanohedron
Golden leaves, twilight
A cliché of wild goose-calls
But they're going north






(EDIT: For those of you who don't know, true haiku attempts to manifest certain rules about seasonality and "cutting"; haikai follows the same 5-7-5 syllabic format as haiku, but otherwise no such rules apply. In Western pop culture these distinctions tend to be blurred or lost altogether under the umbrella term "haiku", but since I'm embarking on trying for serious haiku lately, I have to make these distinctions. Other than that, no big deal either way, here. I changed the thread title to include haikai because there will inevitably be examples of both and, as happens, some may defy easy categorisation. Knock yourselves out. :) )

Re: Haiku

Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2015 10:57 pm
by Coffee
Playing Uilleann pipes
Is not really that easy
Can make one surly

Re: Haiku

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2015 2:08 am
by benhall.1
Dreams of soggy grass
In the golden autumn light
Must re-hair my bow

Re: Haiku

Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 9:33 am
by ScottMaurer
Golden Evening
A pipers gentle humming
barking dogs disturb

Re: Haiku

Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2015 11:46 am
by Nanohedron
Pumpkin spice in this
And in that, ubiquitous
Grumpy Cat hates it

Re: Haiku

Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2015 4:15 pm
by benhall.1
Autumn fruitfulness
This year's crabapple jelly
Anticipation

Re: Haiku

Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2015 10:13 am
by calanthrophy
I recently wrote one about my traffic woes:

http://jakeisalwaysright.blogspot.com/2 ... uy-in.html

Re: Haiku

Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2015 6:40 pm
by chas
John Bigboote is
A lectroid from Planet 10
Who hates John Whorfin

Re: Haiku

Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2015 7:01 pm
by Nanohedron
Strong winds, wet and cold
Nests readied among the trees
Good: the furnace works

Re: Haiku

Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2015 2:46 pm
by Coffee
Curse the hill you climb
Until you reach the summit
Oh how the wind blows

Re: Haiku

Posted: Sat Oct 17, 2015 3:22 pm
by Nanohedron
Outside my window
A leafblower whines nonstop;
I think of murder

Re: Haiku

Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2015 3:27 pm
by Coffee
Fans scream for their teams
Passionately fly colors...
None of it matters

Re: Haiku

Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2015 6:54 pm
by walrii
Candy then turkey
With dressing then rum fruitcake
My, how the scale groans

Re: Haiku

Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2015 1:25 am
by benhall.1
Ironwood tree yellow
Covered in autumn colour
Dull chores engoldened

Re: Haiku

Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2015 8:25 am
by emmline
Yes, I'll sell my house
We'll squeeze in yours while building
There's too much junk here